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Larc'en'ciel and Nova

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:iconjojolovesamelia: is making up a story about fairies and darkins, I got so into it I had to create my own darkin.

Larc'en'ciel is a full fledge 26 year old adult male darkin, he fights to protect Nova because he cares about her she's become what he calls "his treasure". He was hunting in the woods he lives in and found her sitting under a tree completly lost.

Nova on the other hand is a young 18 year old female Dark Ice fairy. There a very rare species since there kind is almost dying out, she doesn't speak much and she's blind but she can see heat movment.

A little known secret, Dark Ice faries have an incredible sence of direction they can find there way out of anything but for some reason she's never left Larc'en'ciel, she's alway's stayed with him.
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I appreciate you making this for me with so much effort, but it's just not how they are. (Please don't hate me for original work critique:pray:)
Darkins always have the three letters D-A-R in their name somewhere (ex: Darson, Darlene, Dyar). Second, males are always either dark blue or purple.
Third, Darkins are the mortal enemy of Butterflys. The only times that they ever interact with each other is when they're fighting or killing the other. Otherwise, love is extremely rare. I see how they spurred through the rarity - creative.
Unfortunately, a Butterfly's wings aren't nearly as big as you've protrayed them either, nor do they have such short names. Nova is a brilliant nickname, but what's her full name? (ex: Chrissy=Chrysanthemum)
Back to Lar'cen - males always have a total of 30 black spines. Females have only 23 dark purple spines in difference.
This bugged me like hell - She (nor any other character) is not a FAIRY. Butterflys are different in a couple of ways. Nothing personal, I just have a peeve when people call Cherry or Chrissy "fairys"...:|
Otherwise, I love their outfits and the details in her wings. My god, I could never pull myself out of doing something as beautiful as that.:heart: As far as their outfits and hair (and Nova's wings)...DAMN. That's pretty awesome! It's only the other stuff (above) that got to me.
I'm SOOOO sorry I had to be so mean about it all, but I just hate when people make these kinds of mistakes. Please forgive me, I meant no offense - critique is meant to help for the future, and that's how I try to make of it.:hug: